I am learning to add detail to support my ideas.
Going to work with my daddy
On Saturday morning my brother, sister and I were going to work with our daddy.
First my daddy woke us up.
First my daddy woke us up.
Next we got dressed into our clothes.
Finally my daddy made us some peanut butter toast and
then we hopped in the truck and ate our toast. I felt glad.
When we got to my daddy’s work, my poppa printed out some pictures Finally my daddy made us some peanut butter toast and
then we hopped in the truck and ate our toast. I felt glad.
and we coloured them in.
I felt very lucky to go to work with my daddy because
I thought if I asked if l could come to work he would let me come and he did.
When my daddy came up the stairs my Uncle Jared came up too. When he got upstairs
I thought if I asked if l could come to work he would let me come and he did.
When my daddy came up the stairs my Uncle Jared came up too. When he got upstairs
he gave us a genormous big chelsea bun each.
My daddy had a little round circled pie. And we ate them.
Our chelsea buns were a good texture and they were nice,
sweet, pink, yummy, with smooth frosting.
After we ate our chelsea buns me and my brother, and sister were
sweet, pink, yummy, with smooth frosting.
After we ate our chelsea buns me and my brother, and sister were
drawing on the whiteboard. I used a pink marker,
my sister used a red marker and my brother
used a blue marker. After that we were finishing
our pictures. Then we went back home.
