Recount Writing

I wrote this story about going to my Nanny and Poppa's house.

I like my story because I worked hard to write a long story.

Going to nanny's and poppa's

On Saturday afternoon my brother, sister,
Leah, Sophia  daddy and I went to my nanny's
and poppa’s house to have dinner and have a long play too.

First me and my family hopped out of the car.

Next we went inside my nanny's and poppa’s house.

After that my nanny started cooking dinner while me,
my brother, my sister and Sophia were playing.

What happened was when me, my brother and
sister were playing with my Uncle Jared he wanted
to play taking photos at the photo shop.

Finally we had a yummy yummy dinner.
After dinner we had some pudding and
our pudding was yummy pavlova.

Uncle Jared. We played the same thing
that we were playing before.
I was feeling really happy that I got to go and
see my nanny and poppa with my brother,
sister and Sophia. After we had a long play
it was dark and I had to say goodbye to my nanny,
poppa and auntys and uncles. After we said
goodbye we went back to our house.

When we got home we hopped into bed

and my daddy tucked us in and said… Goodnight.