Recount Writing - Mother's Day

I am learning to add more details to my writing.

Mother’s Day.

On Sunday it was Mother’s Day but it was raining very very hard and our flowers were wet. They were dripping wet.

When I woke up in the morning I got out of bed and went into the lounge and saw my step dad Mike, my step sister Lilly, my brother Jayden and my sister Abigail.

When I got into the lounge we were writing a card to Mum from all of us.

It said… To mummy lots of love Grace, Lilly,

Jayden and Abigail.